Abraham's letter of motivation

Dear Sir/Madam, This letter is written to apply for the Care Concept World-Scholarship.
I am a fourth-semester MA student at the Freie Universität Berlin. My study focuses on US foreign policy, welfare policy, international migration, and refugee crisis-related topics. This semester, I am studying abroad at Science Po Toulouse in International Relations. In this letter, I will introduce my background and experience. Hope I can be taken into your consideration. I hold nationalities of British National (Overseas) and Hong Kong and have lived in 5 countries. I am a speaker of Cantonese, English, Chinese, German (B1), Modern Greek (A2), French (A1), and Korean (A1). I hold a BA also from FU Berlin. I have been active in academic, business, and humanitarian works. I worked at the Hong Kong University of Science and Technology and the Koç University (Turkey).
In 2020, I represented Europauem (Oxford) to speak at the International Meeting in Political Studies alongside high-ranked government officials, diplomats, and academics such as José Manuel Barroso, former President of the European Commission and former PM of Portugal. I am a member of the Association for the Promotion of Political Economy and the Law and the Young Scholars Initiative. Representing the two organizations, I contributed to a legal-economic study on COVID- 19 responses. We created an interactive map showing the activities taken by different economies during the pandemic.
In the business sectors, I worked at a firm under the Jardine Schindler Group, which holds the largest lift market share in Asia. I am a member of the Global Leadership Challenge, a network of 100 young leaders selected by Oxford University’s The Oxford Character Project, Alibaba Entrepreneurs Fund, and St Gallen Symposium. I am developing a startup hoping to channel COVID-19 vaccines for refugees at Moria Refugee Camp with 5 young leaders. We are in touch with the Greek Health Agency, NGOs and are receiving supports from Salesforce.com, Inc. I was awarded third place at a law and investment competition at the EU-Russia Student Conference of Moscow School of Management and was a delegate to the South American Business Forum in Argentina. I have been very active in learning from many international events such as the Asia-Pacific Business Forum and the Kazakhstan-German Business Forum. For humanitarian works, I taught students in Cambodia.
I also volunteered at Moria Refugee Camp with Eurorelief. I helped with necessities distribution, security, organization, and more. I am a mentor for a Syrian refugee student through a buddy program. And I was awarded for voluntary works from the HK Government. I hope my study abroad in France would equip me with the network, experience, and training in international affairs from a new perspective. I sincerely look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Lok Hang Abraham CHAN